HomeWots upsettin bout that?
Ya big softy. U cry ova anyfin dont ya? XX
Ya big softy. U cry ova anyfin dont ya? XX
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THE GRIFFIN by Bil Caesar
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Mrs P Sylar- Man of Iron
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No, I cry over EVERYTHING!!! 
Except TV and films. 
I just think it's sweet is all, is all.
Except TV and films. I just think it's sweet is all, is all.
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How come u dnt cry ova tv + films?
He aint guna b sweet for long chicken so wudnt get used to it if i were u. XX
He aint guna b sweet for long chicken so wudnt get used to it if i were u. XX
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Just don't! And
Really? I'll just re-read the sweetness, when he's evil. xx
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He's not evil. If he was then he wudnt get baby Jess.
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Fine. Badass and insane about saving her and keeping her alive.
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Great chapter mate
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Cheers Jason.
Wayward Daughter- Queen Of Angst
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Great chapters
And that is sweet!!
And that is sweet!!
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Pippy - He not guna b bad-ass or insane. He jus guna b over protective.
Lowri - Fanx.
Hope u not guna start cryin like the Pipster. Lol.
I got go get my lil man from skool now. Shud b bk on by 9-ish.
Have good day evry1. XXX
Lowri - Fanx.
Hope u not guna start cryin like the Pipster. Lol. I got go get my lil man from skool now. Shud b bk on by 9-ish.
Have good day evry1. XXX
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I'm not crying It's nowhere near sappy or sad enough for that. Yet
K, bye
Have a good day yourself
It's nowhere near sappy or sad enough for that. Yet K, bye
Have a good day yourself
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K, i guna accept that challenge now 2 try + make u cry. Lol. Wont b for a wile yet tho.
Fanx chicken. XXX
Fanx chicken. XXX
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Try it
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See ya, Bil!
Sure, sure, sure. xx
Sure, sure, sure. xx
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Lowri - i wil try 2 make u cry but mite not b for a lil wile yet as not sure wen sumfin soppy wil happen yet. Wil hav 2 c how the story pan out. Lol. XX
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Ok, I can wait
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Gud cos u got no choice. So there!! Lol. XX
Prob hav nxt chapter done 2nite jus figurin out wot guna happen + wich story 2 work on.
BLOODLUST or GRIFFIN? Any ideas Lowri?? XXX
So there!! Lol. XXProb hav nxt chapter done 2nite jus figurin out wot guna happen + wich story 2 work on.
BLOODLUST or GRIFFIN? Any ideas Lowri?? XXX
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I meen ideas on wich story 2 work on, not wots guna happen. Lol. XX
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Which was the last one you updated? Or do you have a more concrete plan for one than the other?
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Last 1 i did was Griffin.
I see BLOODLUST as my priority cos it the 1 i gettin published, Griffin jus more of a mess about tbh. Lol. XX
Hav ruff idea on nxt bloodlust chapter but need 2 sort sum WW2 facts before i can start that. But havnt got clue for the next Griffin tho. Lol.
:'( Im stuck!!!!! Lol.
Jus pik 1 + i wil go from there. Lol. XXX
I see BLOODLUST as my priority cos it the 1 i gettin published, Griffin jus more of a mess about tbh. Lol. XX
Hav ruff idea on nxt bloodlust chapter but need 2 sort sum WW2 facts before i can start that. But havnt got clue for the next Griffin tho. Lol.
:'( Im stuck!!!!! Lol.
Jus pik 1 + i wil go from there. Lol. XXX
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Bloodlust then
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K, hav jus done a bit of the research, so guna work on it. Wil prob do Griffin abit later wen i wan a break. As may hav idea for it cos got both storys in my head + dont wana risk gettin confused (cos it dnt take much) Lol. XX
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CHAPTER 8
January 14th
Carlos and I finish our shift. I go back onto the top deck and I start to shoot sum more cans and bottles again. It has now become a nightly routine, a lot of the ships crew had started rumors about what I did on the deck at night, even Carlos was curious but he had never asked.
Everyone on the cargo ship has their secrets.
I worry more and more about how Kira is, with each day that passes.
I have been shooting cans off of the railing for just over an hour when I hear a noise behind me. I stop shooting the cans and I turn around to see the captain’s first mate looking at me, his eyes wide with shock. He starts to back away from me with his hands raised defensively.
“It’s okay. I’m not going to hurt you.”
The first mate turns and runs toward the sleeping quarters as he shouts for help.
The rest of the crew pours out of the hatch trying to see what the fuss is about. The first mate is talking French really fast to them and I can’t quite make it out but judging by the looks on the rest of the crews faces, it’s not looking good for me.
Suddenly the crew all start grabbing things that they can use for a weapon. Anything they can get from screwdrivers and crowbars to planks of wood and loose pipes.
They start to walk toward me and Carlos steps in front of me, he talks in French to the crew and tries to defend me, saying that I haven’t hurt anyone and that no one on the ship is innocent.
He really is a good friend.
Then the crew rushes us, raising their weapons high. Carlos steps forward and tries to help me fight them off. We fight hard; I’m trying as hard as I can to not use my gift to drill holes into them.
Carlos is taking a severe beating as he fights six armed men off, then one of the men behind him stabs Carlos in the back with a kitchen knife. Carlos falls to his knees as another man hits him in the face with the hook end of a crowbar, the crowbar tears Carlos’ face open as the man pulls it back out.
“Nooooooooooooo!” I scream as I watch my only friend falls to the floor in a crumpled bloody heap.
Before I realize it, I kill twelve men with my gift. The rest of the crew look at their fallen comrades that lie at my feet and then look at me with wonder in their eyes.
Four men stand in front of me; the one in front of the small group is the man that killed Carlos with the crowbar.
I raise both my hands toward him and lower my thumbs, two holes appear in the man’s face. Pieces of skull and brain spray onto the three men stood behind him.
The three men look at each other.
Two of them charge at me, raising their weapons high.
They are both dead before they get too close to me.
The last man stares at me and drops his pipe to the floor as he backs over to the railing with his hands raised. He grabs the railing and jumps over board. I run to the railing and look down into the sea.
The man obviously didn’t realize he was at the rear of the ship, the water is red as the propeller churns at the ocean.
It takes me about twenty minutes to throw the bodies over the side of the ship.
I move up to the upper deck and realize that controlling a boat is a lot harder than I thought, I go back below decks and make myself some food as I rummage through the crews things, looking for anything that I could have a use for as I try to figure out my next move.
I’m still a few days from Miami and I don’t even know how to stop the ship once I’m there.
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Great chapter
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Thanks Lowri. How come u changed ur name?? + wens the nxt chapters out for urs? (Sory but im shit for rememberin the names of them. Lol.) I get confused wit mine. Lol. XX
How come u changed ur name?? + wens the nxt chapters out for urs? (Sory but im shit for rememberin the names of them. Lol.) I get confused wit mine. Lol. XXSimilar topics
