It's set six months in the future after the series finale (stupid nbc ) and is canon with all events except! for Claire's little stunt at the end there. Please let me know what you think! I'm almost done with chapter 2 so if you guys are enjoying it I'll keep posting!
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When Lovers Sleep by Raiast
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When Lovers Sleep by Raiast
Okay I'm gonna post the first chapter of my fanfic When Lovers Sleep.
It's set six months in the future after the series finale (stupid nbc ) and is canon with all events except! for Claire's little stunt at the end there. Please let me know what you think! I'm almost done with chapter 2 so if you guys are enjoying it I'll keep posting!
It's set six months in the future after the series finale (stupid nbc ) and is canon with all events except! for Claire's little stunt at the end there. Please let me know what you think! I'm almost done with chapter 2 so if you guys are enjoying it I'll keep posting!
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Looking forward to it. And welcome to the forum
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That was kind of a disaster. lol. My spacing went CRAZY on here for some reason... I'd go through and edit it but it's the longest chapter I've ever written (about 10,000 words, 22 pages in word).
Soooo I'm just going to post the LINK to the first chapter of my story, which is already up on fanfiction.net lol
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6028247/1/When_Lovers_Sleep
Don't worry about commenting on that site (although the more reviews I get the more readers I can draw in), if you have a comment or question about it, post it here, cuz I'm sure I'll be lurking quite often.
Soooo I'm just going to post the LINK to the first chapter of my story, which is already up on fanfiction.net lol
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6028247/1/When_Lovers_Sleep
Don't worry about commenting on that site (although the more reviews I get the more readers I can draw in), if you have a comment or question about it, post it here, cuz I'm sure I'll be lurking quite often.
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hahahaha, I was just looking in my user stats and my post makes up .07% of the total posts. Thought it was appropriate to share, considering the site and all that. LOL!
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Hahaha. That is a little weird!!
You live in Minnesota? What time is it there?
You live in Minnesota? What time is it there?
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1:20 pm. It's kind of a cool, crappy day (been a little rainy recently) but in May we had a heatwave of 80-90 degrees for a whole week!
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It's windy a hell in Scotland "/
um, I can't read you story just now but I promise I'll read it in the future *does hand rolling thing*
um, I can't read you story just now but I promise I'll read it in the future *does hand rolling thing*
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Great, really well written
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Yeah, it is really good, Nat!
Well, if it helps, Leicester's weather is crappier.
Well, if it helps, Leicester's weather is crappier.
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Thanks everyone!!! I really appreciate the input! It gives me fuzzies in my tummy. lol
Back to the grind (almost finished with chappie 2...if yer interested, I'll email a copy to you: banana_popsicle@hotmail.com )
Ohh, and Wayward Daughter, Pippy tells me YOU'RE the one to help with my Peter dilemma... I just don't really feel like I can capture him quite well enough (although he's pretty minor in this story)
Back to the grind (almost finished with chappie 2...if yer interested, I'll email a copy to you: banana_popsicle@hotmail.com )
Ohh, and Wayward Daughter, Pippy tells me YOU'RE the one to help with my Peter dilemma... I just don't really feel like I can capture him quite well enough (although he's pretty minor in this story)
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I kinda suck at writing canons though - there's a reason why every one of my stories have only my own original characters.
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You're really good at RPing Peter, Low.
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*shrug* I guess all I can do is my best.. and since the series is done anything after Brave New World is pretty much AU, and I guess anything can go so... I just won't worry about it
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just finished reading it, it's brilliant
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Yayy! Thank you!!
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Hey ya'll... how long was Sylar "Nathan" in volume five? was it like four or five months?
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It was 6 weeks before V5 started, wasn't it? Not sure how many weeks into the season The 5th Stage was meant to be, though
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I just wrote "several weeks" lol I think I'm just about done with chapter 2! *crosses fingers*
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Guess that works and looking forward to it
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It's officially up! check it out!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6028247/2/
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6028247/2/
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just finished reading it, fantastical
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It is
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has APPLE read it? Cos she may get a 'little' annoyed at the Sylaire
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She conceded that it's good and well written and said shame about the pairing
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It is very good, Nat.