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    Post by Rokstarr Sat 12 Sep 2009 - 11:26

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    The Prologue

    Hetty Bork was two years old when her mother died. She knew almost nothing of her mother’s death at that time- too young to know that the red splatters on the sink was not from her father’s re-decorating.
    It was May the 13th 1989 when Kerry Bork had ‘died’. Dave had claimed that she had slipped on getting out of the shower, and cracked her head on the sink. But Kent Bork, her seven year old son, knew better.
    Dave and Kerry’s marriage had been going downhill since the birth of Hetty. Dave had threatened and beaten Kerry, claiming that he was more than she, a mortal, could ever be. Kerry of course thought that her husband was insane. Dave had always wanted a baby girl. But Hetty was not made by a good night and smiles, but by tears, blood and begging.
    This is her story. The story of her mysterious past, her half-mad father and the cracks running through her mind. The worrying, the pleading and the disadvantage of having a power-crazed father.
    This, is her life.
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    Post by Superheroesfanatic-IR Sat 12 Sep 2009 - 11:34

    study
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    Post by Rokstarr Sat 12 Sep 2009 - 11:38

    Smile

    I never knew that the prologue was gonna look that short, I want the actual chapters to be 5-6 pages long on word :S
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    Post by Superheroesfanatic-IR Sat 12 Sep 2009 - 11:42

    :O
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    Post by Rokstarr Sat 12 Sep 2009 - 11:43

    I hope that I can pick up my standards for chapter 1, the prologue wasn't my best Embarassed
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    Post by Superheroesfanatic-IR Sat 12 Sep 2009 - 12:07

    it was great Very Happy
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    Post by Rokstarr Sun 13 Sep 2009 - 11:42

    Thanks Very Happy
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    Post by Wayward Daughter Sun 13 Sep 2009 - 11:44

    Yeah, good start alright
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    Post by Rokstarr Sun 13 Sep 2009 - 11:50

    Thanks Lowri Smile
    I wont stop this one halfway through like my other one's, it's going to be from when her mother died till when she does, then I might start a very long term MS or carry on AWA or my first one.
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    Post by Wayward Daughter Sun 13 Sep 2009 - 11:52

    You're welcome Very Happy
    Sounds good alright
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    Post by Mr_Isaac Sun 13 Sep 2009 - 22:54

    Very good start.
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    Post by Rokstarr Mon 14 Sep 2009 - 16:14

    Thanks Mr_Isaac! Very Happy
    Coming from you and Lowri that means a lot Smile
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    Post by Mr_Isaac Mon 14 Sep 2009 - 21:45

    No worries.

    So have you decided on AWA or your original then?
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    Post by Superheroesfanatic-IR Mon 14 Sep 2009 - 21:54

    (:O) how about Mwah..

    lol i suck at writing anyway Very Happy
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    Post by ItsAGibbo Thu 17 Sep 2009 - 10:46

    Bloody awsome, man!!! Keep it up!
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    Post by ItsAGibbo Thu 17 Sep 2009 - 10:46

    Rajan, at the moment, I suck as well.
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    Post by Superheroesfanatic-IR Thu 17 Sep 2009 - 18:09

    Twilight Phoenix wrote:Rajan, at the moment, I suck as well.

    you cant! if you have 3 books out Shocked
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    Post by Rokstarr Thu 17 Sep 2009 - 21:34

    Thanks Jade.
    Rajan, what do you mean? :O Jade, are you Stephanie Mayer undercover? *plays dramatic music*

    nah just joking Wink
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    Post by Wayward Daughter Thu 17 Sep 2009 - 21:53

    Lol

    No, otherwise she'd say she had 4
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    Post by Superheroesfanatic-IR Fri 18 Sep 2009 - 18:07

    lol
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    Post by ItsAGibbo Sat 19 Sep 2009 - 17:59

    OK, I agree with Lowri.

    LMFAO, Rajan.

    I'm not writing as good as I should be. Nothing makes sense, the discribsions are bad and I cant think of any good ideas. I think my writing is slipping. I may have to quit altogether and just stop publishing.
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    Post by Superheroesfanatic-IR Sat 19 Sep 2009 - 18:16

    keep it together women
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    Post by ItsAGibbo Sat 19 Sep 2009 - 18:18

    I CANT!!!!


    Wails!!!
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    Post by Superheroesfanatic-IR Sat 19 Sep 2009 - 18:18

    *shakes jade... women dont loose it*
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    Post by ItsAGibbo Sat 19 Sep 2009 - 18:20

    Continues to wail.

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