World 3 - Renegade

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:33

Are you one of them?

Jack knew who he was, knew too well, but wondered why this person wanted to know, why so urgently? what could she do?

Tracy wandered off, she walked towards the waterfall, it was as if nothing was in her way, she couldn;t notice the surrounding, all she could here was the trickling of the water fall... it glistened and shined with colour

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by A Returning Charlotte Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:36

"What do you mean? Just tell me where you saw him! It's a simple enough question. I need to know. Please. Tell me."

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:39

Why? he killed them all

Jack noticed Tracy had walked over, this frantic women distracted him... he needed to get he out the way... He saw Tracy after 15 seconds of talking to the women, she sat next to the fountain...

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by Wayward Daughter Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:40

Elan had stopped, not willing to leave her little haven just yet, and she heard the conversation. She wondered who the woman was, she didn't recognise her, and what she wanted with Peter.

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by A Returning Charlotte Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:43

Superheroesfanatic-IR wrote:Why? he killed them all

Jack noticed Tracy had walked over, this frantic women distracted him... he needed to get he out the way... He saw Tracy after 15 seconds of talking to the women, she sat next to the fountain...

"Where is he?" she yells, frantic. "Oh never mind. You obviously don't know. Time waster!" Then she runs off and out of the park.

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by Wayward Daughter Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:48

Who was she? Why was she looking for him?

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:51

Jack shoyted as she Ran..

He teleported... i saw him at kirby plaza, yesturday...!!!

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:51

(i dont think my epic moment is working out in W4, any writing tips D:<)

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by Wayward Daughter Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:53

Who was that?

(Idk, I think it's working. Except mine's sort of contradicting it, sorry blush

What do you want to happen?)

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:58

(nah yours is going perfect Wink

i dnt know im sort of making it up as i go along, i have some idea though)

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 22:58

Peter

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by A Returning Charlotte Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:01

Superheroesfanatic-IR wrote:Jack shoyted as she Ran..

He teleported... i saw him at kirby plaza, yesturday...!!!

The woman stopped, turned around and stared at him for a few seconds. Then she ran back and grabbed him by the collars.

"Where did he go? What did you do?"

(don't attack her)

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:05

Get off me... he came i saw him... i went to... to punch him, then he vanished like a coward

Jack wasa angry, this women had no idea what he was, what he had done, what he made people feel... The days people had lost... crying...dieing...captured

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by A Returning Charlotte Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:07

"What were you punching him for? You were the one who made him go! Why??"

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by Wayward Daughter Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:08

Who are you? Elan asks the woman.
What do you want with Peter?

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:10

He... He took the person i loved... he killed millions of people... i was angry... you should of seen him.. coming back to the crime he comitted, like a sick serial killer

Jack got angry, and he saw Elan return

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by Wayward Daughter Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:17

Elan interrupts him.

What?! Tracy survived! You got her back, you've no idea how lucky you are, Jack!

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by A Returning Charlotte Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:18

Flickerflame wrote:Who are you? Elan asks the woman.
What do you want with Peter?

Superheroesfanatic-IR wrote:He... He took the person i loved... he killed millions of people... i was angry... you should of seen him.. coming back to the crime he comitted, like a sick serial killer

Jack got angry, and he saw Elan return

The woman was about to answer Elan as she realised she recognised her and she wanted to ask her about it as well but she got angry because of Jack's comments and ran off before she did something she'd regret.

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by A Returning Charlotte Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:19

Flickerflame wrote:Elan interrupts him.

What?! Tracy survived! You got her back, you've no idea how lucky you are, Jack!

(

He's a liar!)

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:20

(if you give me a chance to finish angry

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:21

He is a killer, i may of got her back... but i lost her...

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by Wayward Daughter Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:26

Killers kill deliberately.

She glared at him, and also ran off.

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by Superheroesfanatic-IR Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:27

Jack walked off... he walked towards Tracy

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by A Returning Charlotte Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:28

(Oooh temper temper tantrumers.)

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by Wayward Daughter Wed 28 Oct 2009 - 23:36

(Can Elan meet your mysterious girl (Jessica?) )

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